What do you think of my poems? How can I improve them?

The rhyming is forced. If this poem was about love, I don't feel it. I understand that these phrases are intended to express your emotions but they sound weak. Love is something that shouldn't be described like cooking instructions. Love is tumultuous. It's unsound. You're writing needs to expose that. Love is probably the most difficult thing to write about. I suggest that you keep writing and not in any particular form. Don't worry about rhyming or meter at first until you get your tone. After that you can mess around with rhyme. What you need to do is write what you know; what you feel. Don't even try to make sense of it because the most nonsensical thing I can think of is love. Bonne chance.